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This poem was written about a guy friend of mine whom I've had a crush on for months. Every time we talk it's almost like he's taunting me, as if he knows I want him and likes knowing that I can never have him.

Lately I've tried telling myself that I'm over him, that I should move on to more realistic things. But every time I say that, I'm given another reason to rekindle my desires for him - the way he might look at me, or laugh with me, or smile at me in his peculiar way. It's eerie sometimes, and I know that it's just me seeing things I want to see. But maybe it isn't.

Whatever it is, it keeps me dreaming, and sometimes my dreams are all I've got.

What It Is You Do To Me

There you sit
smiling
And it's you I watch
wanting
But you don't even know
What it is you do to me
So I keep on watching
and wanting
as I bleed

Every time I look at you
Every time I talk to you
Every time I smell you
My heart continues
melting
And I am forever
dreaming

Whenever you pass me by
Whenever you catch my eye
I feel like I want to cry
Because of what it is you do to me

Your eyes
gleaming
And your lips
pleading
And your hands
exploring
While my heart remains
bleeding

Every time you look at me
I wonder what it is you see
Every time you talk to me
And I hear that beautiful voice
My knees get weak
My stomach flutters
My chest collapses
My neck hairs tingle
And I stop breathing
Just in that moment in time
When you do what it is you do to me

As I sit here
yearning
I imagine you
sleeping
And I want to hold you endlessly
Forever in my arms for eternity
I'll continue
dreaming
As long as you are
living
breathing
being
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432 Visitor Comments

Mari
These are the exact feelings I get when I'm with my crush. Love it!
Amor
I love this poem. I know exactly how that is!lol! Keep it up. but a question who is she?
leslie
Your poem is beautiful. . . Very touching. If you could or if you have time I would love to read more of your work.
Ashley
It's funny how you see a poem and that is how you feel. This is one of my faves. Ashley
Bekah
I am a teenage girl in high school and i am a poet. I have won awards for some of my poetry. The only other thing i love better than writting my own poetry, is reading the work of a fellow artist, because that's what a poet is, an artist, only with words. I loved this poem so much. It really reached down and gripped me. Keep up the awsome work.
Samantha
I loved this poem I had a boyfriend last year and we broke up after a while because we faught constantly but at first it was just lets take a break that left me constantly wondering when that break would be over &this poem just hit my situation perfectly Thank you for expressing your feelings with others it means alot to me
Laura
i thought this poems was a deep, thoughtful, and sweet poem. i loved it its now my favorite poem. well id love to read more of your poems if you dont mind sending some to me. bye laura
amanda
this one killed me inside its like this is everything i wanted to say. its what i feel this very moment hurt and so sad.
Cierra
This is a very beautiful poem. I really can relate. I wished i could be able to write something so deep and truthful.
TINA
i really liked your poem it was really nice. hope you write some more :)
kasammi
this is exactly what i feel with my best guy friend he know i love him and stuff but he likes my best friend great work keep it up :)
katrina
this is a really good poem i love this boy name keith and i think the same way! i love this poem!
lakindra
i really like this poem and it someone i feel a good connection about and this poem had me wantin to cry i really love this poem!
Abby
this poem is exactly what i am feeling. this is just a wonderful emotional poem.
Tationia
I loved this poem sooo much. I've had a lot going on at once and this pretty much wrapped it all up. It was gteat, keep it up Bobby!
Erica
I love this poem because i feel exactly the same way about a boy. This poem is on point.
Tonya
This poem touched me because even though I've tried really hard not to fall in love again due to the fact of getting my heart broken so many times before. I can't help it. I'm falling deeply in love with a guy named Chris and this poem describes how I feel about him. well. it's close because words really CAN'T describe how I feel but this poem is really really close to what I feel for him.
Summer
I loved this poem! It was so sweet it reminded me of the first time that I saw the one guy who I truely love!
lanisa
i like this poen becuz it tuches me alot i reminds me of my frst love but w/e
nikki
it was good
lucy
I think your poem was amazing. It's crazy how someone I know nothing about can write so beautifully what Im going through right now. I really like this one boy but I know he doesn't feel the same and we can't be together. Your poem made my feelings seem ten times clearer. And its comforting to know someone elseis going through the same thing Thanks for helping me realise how much i really do want him.
melissa
WoW! I fell in love with your poem. It was so sweet and moving. I really liked it a lot.
Kelsey
I give it 5 stars. Its so true for me and my guy friend. Good work! :D
latsha
i love your poem it is so sweet cause it reminds me of how my boyfriend does me he did me so wrong called me out in front of a lot of pepole and i dont no what it is about him but i love that boy to death even though he did me wrong thats going to always be my baby and i love him but anyways keep up the good written and holla at me on my, my space
sophie
how ive felt about a guy this year i rele am over it now but it took about 3 years one of the hardest things ive evr had to do
Samantha
Hi! I love your poem. It reminds me of someone that i care about. hope to see more from you in the future.
ashley
you have put a lot of thought into this poem. I write poems, but none compare to this one. i love it!
shadai
it seems u took my feelings out of my soul and arranged them to express how i feel. i really admire your work of art and it is very touching keep on writing.
Iris
its so nice. i just loved it i can relate to it
To Much For You
I like this poem alot its like you know me and what im goin threw. I am in a realitionship now but its like were together but were not together. I think he knows that i love him an ill do anything fro him so therefore he thinks he can do anything he wants and he knows ill still be here for him right by his side. Please continue to write poems because god has blessed you with a talent that should not be taken for granted.
Beba
wow this poem really touched me cause i feel like that over this boy and im afraid to tell him because i dont wanna ruin what we have
Steph
Hey this poem is brilliant, Good work! xxx
Ashley
This poem reminds on how i feel about a guy that i like this is a good poem!
meg
hey, i just wrote a poem almost identical to yours the other day. i think writing helps and i want you to know ur not alone- and also, talk about it with him. im the most innocent girl ull ever meet(ive never done ANYTHING with a guy lmao, my friends call me the 'ultimate virgin' lmao) but he made me do it- he got me to do it- one of the things he does to me-lol. anyways, we talked it over for a long time until we came to a general understanding. its easier now. i still like him- like today we went out for ice cream, and he was tellin me about this other girl he likes. its hard but what can u do? keep dreamin girl- i find dreams keep me surviving
Jason
Dude that poem is exactly how i feel right now cuz i have a girl that i like but dont know how to tell her and know i do cuz of u man Thanks
marie
ur poem is awesome it is exactly how i feel for my boyfriend i also write poetry i love to read poems also so i read urs and it rocks! keep up the good work!
Heather
I love the poem because it describes how I feel about a guy I have always had a thing for but never could tell him. But I write poems myself and I find that it really helps get things out that I keep in. So keep on writing cus we have a gift!
poem
this poem just touched me, it explained everything i feel for the man i love the sheer sadness of needing someone so much you feel like your life isnt worth living without them. the part where you was sayin youre lips pleading it just reminding me of him lying to me about how much he lied and pretended he wanted me this is my favorite poem. xxxx
LAVI
I work in an office and I have a crush on a married man(nobody known of course) when I read the poem it was like the poem was written for me. I feel all of what is described in your poem.
Flame
This poem touched me as i never thought anyone could ever feel the same as i desire a girl but these feelings stop me from talking to her for more than a second.
Tracy
This poem describes the very essence of what it feels like to want someone so deeply that you see all the time. thank you. its nice to know I'm not alone.
KIMBERLY
I AM A WRITER MYSELF. GREAT POEM. KEPT ME INTERESTED ENOUGH TO READ TO THE END. GREAT STANZAS - LOVE YOUR STYLE!
aafreen
i have a guy whom i love a lot the thing is dat we r in true luv and ur poem did remember me of d first time i saw him. i too write poems on my own wen in mood and so do understand the pain and feelings in our poem. it is really on top of the world. people like u and me keep the magic of luv in words expressed.
Charlita
Wow, this poem really portrays what I'm going through right now with one of my best guy friends. I like him so much, but the difference is that he knows. He's all I want, and all I can't have. "Nothing tastes as sweet as what you can't have."
Kim
wow! that is just wow! i love it! it is so wonderful! every word u said made my heart full of joy! wow that is the best poem i have ever read that was writttin by a boy! lol can u write me a poem? please!
Danielle
This poem was awesome. Its crazy how a complete stranger can sum up every feeling i have for my boyfriend. You are so talented. Thankyou for your poems they help alot!
mary
this was a alsomw poem and it was so good that it touched me really good and it was the best one i have ever read in my life
Tucker
I loved it. Who is she
Jamie
i love this poem, this is just the way i feel about my boyfriend. i really do think that he doesn't know what he does to me. it amazes me each time i talk or see him of how much i love him. this poem describes us perfectly.
gracie
This is a great poem. I have felt the exact same way and I am surprised to see someone else has as well and also has the skill to put it into words. I loved it!
Danny
I love this Poem, Because it reflects what is happening on in my life right now, I love this girl, with all my heart, evry1 thinks its puppy love, but it really isn't, cas i really do love her always 4 ever. Thanks alot, its Brightend my day up! Danny
brittni
I love this poem i think its really romantic and sweet and it reminds me of my boyfriend jonathan
brittni
that was a great poem
maria
great poem! but have you ever tryed telling him the way you feel????
Casey
I know how you fel and i feel the same way
nicole
this was probably the best poem that i have read yet. keep up the good work bobby! xoxoxo nicole
Megan
I can relate to this poem so much It touched my heart Imet a guy who i like i let him get close to me and now its just like that thanks so much this poem is great
gabby
aww i like this one its cute
Cheyenne
this poem moved me beyond words. i feel exactly how this poem describes. u r a really good writer. keep up the good work!
Brittney
This poem reminds me of a crush I had on a close guy friend last year. It's really good!
Charisse
I almost cried reading this poem. From a scae of 1-10 I give it a 20. It is exactly how I feel. I think about him 24/7. He said he liked me a long time ago. But now it seems as he was just messing with my head.
Alyssa
I really loved that poem because I could relate to everything that was said.
shellie
i like your poem alot it makes me realize that me losing my ex dosent matter anymore keep up the good work
Lara
This poem is absoloutly amazing. I just totaly love it. I love poetry but I never have time to read that much. This is the first time I've ever read a poem that expressed the exact way i feel and probebly the way I'm going to have to feel for the rest of my because of my religion. which by the way i love very much but thats the way it is if i want to be true to my lord. Well anyway i thought it was brilliant absoloutly amazing.
Benjamin
Sad yet beauiful time in evreyone's life.
NINA
GREAT POEM
geraldine
that was hot
DEE
I LOVE THAT POEM IT REMINDS OF MY BOO KEEP WRIITING U GOOD
Alicia
I thought it was cute very good description on how you or anybody would feel for some one I give it a 5 star poem it's good it's how I feel about this one boy I like
melisa
it is very good and i love it and i think it is the best ive read so far
Morningstar
i love your poem because it explains as close to as exactly as a person can get with words alone what it feels like to see Him across the room, a few chairs down, passing you in the hallway, and presenting a class project. anywhere. beautiful, great, extraordinary.
Leah
I really was feelin da poem you know i mean i say it because thats what happens to me when i be with my boyfriend so dee i feel what you was saying and go on playa do yo thing
aresa
my boyfriend asked me why i loved him and i didnt know what words to use or say but when i read your poem it said everything that i was feeling about him it was like you knew what i felt and put it in the right form. thank you
Hina
I love this poem I know how it feels the way that you descibed. It just tears you apart but at the same time, gives you meaning and life. It is wonderful and I hope you keep writing.
Amber
I would have to say it was the BEST poem i have ever read it described me SOOOOO much !
Nikki
I love your poem. There were so many times throughout middle school and high school, when I was absolutly head over heals for someone. Your words are exactly what I was thinking back then. Amazing.
Em
THIS IS THE SWEETIST POEM! im prety sur evry1 has ben here b4 . . . cus im in it almost evryday! n it is rely cunfurtin 2 kno tht im not alone in this world! hopfuly yer crush reads this. i wish i could send it 2 all of mine but i wont! but itz nice 2 kno other ppl fil the same!
priscilla
Wow, this is exactly what im feeling for a boy i work with! His name is richie and he is my best friend but in a way i get these feelings that i never felt for n-e one. What he does'nt know is that i have a crush on him and that i want him. i want to be more then friends but im scared to tell him how i feeel cause i dont want our friendship tp end! Well, you did a wonderful job with this poem and its the best one ive read so far. = )
Adrienne
i truly cried when i read your poem. i read it over and over again. i loved it so much that i am voting the highest bid for you. ~call me ADIE~
ieisha
wow this is a great poem it inspired me to go after what i really want. I really love your poem thank you so much. This is the best poem i have read so far! =D
Rasheedah
I like the poem because its real. YOu always think about how the person you care so much about thinks about you. I also write poems and I hope you keep on writing them.
Britney
I love this poem it reminds me of the way I felt about my boyfriend before we started going out.
kiari
i loved it
Samantha
I loved ur poem it is one of the best I have ever read! love samantha
Kendra
I really love this poem. Do you have anymore of these poems
Amy
I really loved this poem i have very similar feelings for one of my really good friends.
Tanyka
That is some deep stuff you are talking about! I like that!
shanora
i am a poet myself, and i think that this is one of the few poems i've read that i could feel you through your writing
kelly
that poem was awsome i really liked it. keep up the good work. i do a lot of them myself.
Cheryl
I love this poem soo much ^-^. its really deep. kinda reminds me of myself actually. anyways. love the poem ^_^. keep up the good work =)
aymee
Oh:my is the only thing i can think of you tell the exact way i feel when he looks at me.
Rachel
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( OMG U DONT KNOW HOW MUCH THIS POEM IS TO ME. YOU ARE THE MOST TALANTED PERSON. THIS POEM ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY. NOT JOKING. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD POEM THE WAY YOU SHOW YOU DESIRE AND CRAVE THAT PERSON SO MUCH IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL. I FEEL THAT I AM LOCKED IN A CAGE AND I SEE THE BOY, AND AS I REACH MY ARM OUT HE IS IN REACH, BUT HE FADES AWAY. I CANT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR EXPRESSING IT FOR ME THANKYOU xXxXxXxXxXx
hannah
i absoulutly love this poem. i is exactly how i feel about the guy i like. your an amazing poet!
Sarah
your poem is very touching and anyone who has been in a simular situation, like me, would relate to it.
Jessica
This is one of the best poems i've ever read. it reminds me of myself and how i feel about a friend i have. you are a very talented writer i hope you keep writing. Good luck:)
lucy
this poem is really nice because the person who wrote it ha s lot a talent i wish i could wirte poems like you do ok later lucy
Ash
This poem is amazing!Its not often that you see a poem this greatly developed. It tells the reader every emotion you are feeling and portrays the way you feel. Good job! Defintley keep writing you are very talented:D
angel
All i can say is WOW!
L.
Your poem touched me, mainly because I could understand every word written. Good work, very lovely.
Nicole
This poem is so amazing! It's everythng im feeling and more.
kahana
IT WAZ COOL BECAUSE I REMAIND ME OF MY CRUSH I WISH SHE KNEW I LIKE HER BUT I GIVE MORE THAN 100 POINTS 2 THE AUTHOR BECAUSE IT WAZ REALLY GOOD
Rebecca
This Poem is beautiful.
alice
i feel this peom has touched me ever line describes how i feel for a guy that is blind of how i feel
Mayrie
Very nice. I understand the feelings you express and I love this. Keep it up!
Brittany
This poem was exactly like what I'm going through right now. It was an awesome poem!
christian
Wow, this poem amazes me. It was beautiful and completely agrees with what I have been feeling for awhile. this poem almost makes me cry! Thanks so much for writing something so beautiful (because I usually hate poetry)!
Jasmin
I like you poem its good and i just wanted to tell you that
maggie
wonderful poetry
Lisa
i really did like it cuz i can relate to what im going through in life.
Tierra
This poem really hit base to what i've been feeling about a special person in my life and i just had to send him a copy of your poem to let him know what it is he does to me when he is around and when he isn't around me. So I personally want to think you for writting that beautiful poem and tell you to keep on writting because that was beautiful writting. It brought a tear to my eye.
brittany
i think ur poems iz mad hot. all da stuff u say in it r happenin 2 me wit i boy i am feelin mad much. so can relate 2 everything u say in ur poem. i just wanted 2 tell u dat n i would rate ur poem a 5 {being da highest}.
harmony
WOW! you really have a heart that is finding something. to make yourself complete. Great poem. great wording
Alysia
This poem talks about everything my boyfriend does to me.
Cindy
I know this may sound stupid, but that's exactly the way I feel. Thank you.
Emily
This poem moved me to tears. It reminds to so much of somthing I'm going through that it's creepy. My props to the author.
Adrien
I absoulty love this poem because it fit my exact situation that im in right now i support all the way bobby
alice
this is a beautiful poem. its deep and who ever wrote this should be very happy with there work! please post sum more just like these!
Vicki
This poem is awesome! It is so well written and full of emotion. I know exactly what the writer means because I am going through that exact thing with a guy I've liked for 3 years. and we never talk. We used to. but that was a long time ago.
Freddie
10/10 your poem really touched me, its exactly how i feel about someone that i am trying to get over so badly. Your emotional heart brought me to tears.
Tyler
You described all the feelings I feel about the one I love but can't have. It was a very good poem and I feel the same thing everyday
Wera
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW nice poem. it is really cute!
yashica
I THINK THIS POEM IS GREAT BECUZ RIGHT NOW IM IN THAT KIND OF SITUATION WITH MY EX. I LOVE HIM TO DEATH BUT WE'RE NOT TOGETHER AND I MISS HIM ALOT SO ITS LIKE IM STUCK ON HIM AND WHAT HE HAS DONE TO ME.
Anice
I absolutely love this poem it describes my situation rite now perfectly. Genius!
Jarell
When i read your poem i was like wow, every word that was said is how i feel for this girl i know right now, this is a poem that touched me. And as poet i rate you a 11 out of 1-10
Alex
omg. great poem! i can relate to it so much good job and keep writing!
Tanya
That poem was amazing. This is my first time on this site and youre the first person i voted for. Rock on.
Reshaud
I'm really feelin this poem
dhdsfh
This poem is awsome I was looking for something like this to explain how I feel. And it is so true in the life of young people today. You did a wounderful job.
SARAH
this poem was so cool and it made me think of what my best friend is going through and i hope that this poem will make her feel bettter. thanks sarah p. s. How can i help her?
LISSETTE
FROM A RATING FROM 1-10 I GIVE THIS POEM A 10! I JUST LOVED IT! THE WHOLE POEM DESCRIBES HOW I FELT ONCE BEFORE ABOUT THAT SOMEONE SPECIAL! THE WORDS EACH IN EVERY LINE WOULD JUST GRAB MY ATTENTION AND I KEPT ON WANTING TO READ IT! I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM!
Deliela
i think it was a GREAT poem and i liked it so much that i printed it so all my friends can see it
You CHi
Wow . omg . wen i first read dis . i felt like it was me . because before i had that feelin . i guess i noe wah u mean . wonderful poem ^^ . i love it
Autumn
I really liked your poem and I can totally relate to it!
Elizabeth
This is the best poem i have ever read it is very very good if i knew you i would give $2000 for your poem. Well it is a very good poem and keep up the good writing.
Baby
This is a very good poem. I love it. It should be #1. Thats how good it is to me.
Kayla
Your poem is really good! It reminds m of the first time I thought I was really in love. Keep writing poems maybe someday you will be famous~!~
keondra
This poem is very good.
yvette
i think your poem was real good
James
You, sir, are a most excellent poet, and this is a most beautiful poem. You have perfectly captured one of the most difficult feelings and put it into heart-wrenching words. You will go far.
Chris
I really like this poem. The person that wrote this must have put some effort in writing this wonderful poem. The other reason i really like this poem is i am feeling this way to this person i realy like but i really dont know how to express my luv verbally to this person. So yeah this is a really good poem. you wrote a good one keep ur hard work up
Melissa
Sadly enough, I can relate to this poem. I have been there before, and perhaps, I am right now.
george
i love your poem it was awesome i know how you feel because ive been in the same situations that describes me alot
emily
I loved this beautiful poem.
red
I love it it is sooo. great.
Jess
I absolutley loved this poem! It is amazing! It's just I can't even say. You are an amazing writer, keep on writing!
innoxius
I loved this! It was really cool! props. 9. 5\10
Reahannon
wow! this poem is awesome it is all so true keep up the good work good job!
Roxanne
I really think this is a great poem.
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good
Amanda
I really love this poem! I can relate so well to it! There was a guy that was just my friend and then after waiting 2 long years were together and have been for 10 months! I love him deeply, and this poem has really touched me! I THINK YOU SHOULD WIN FIRST PRIZE
Tyler
This poem is so amazing! I feel exactly the same way about this amazing girl, and i have experienced all that you wrote about and i think it is amazing and comforting that other people go through this exact thing. Thank you for writing this
Dizzy
This poem touched me very deeply and i thank you for that. It is excellent and it has alot of meaning to it. you must have loved very much. This poem has great reflection on my own relationship and in my relationship it is hard to tell people who im in love with because i am gay but i love this person very mcuh. great job
Ozzetta
i like that so much . Is that the only poem that you have did . if you have some more can you send them to me thank you so much
Casey
this is a really awesome poem. i loved it.
clarice
this poem is how i feel about my boyfriend. its kewl though
Vickey
I loved it. you captured exactly how i feel towards some close to me. and . i just love it.
Megan
hey! i just wanted to say that i am in the exact same situation (but from a girl to a guy. ) and it really spoke to me, i sent it to him so maybe he'll take a hint, all becuase of you! it was very nice, and i really liked it, thanks Megan
fran
good poem
AMY
THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER READ
ashlee
it reminds me of me
Joy
I love this poem 2 death. No lie i Think this is the best poem on this site 4 real. i love the way it is written. its my fav in the world
Bridget
this poem is so good. keep up the good work!
ANGEE
WOW! THIS POEM WAS SERIOUSLY AWESOME. AS SOON AS I READ IT, I PRINTED IT AND SHARED IT WITH MY FAMILY. YOU'RE EXTREMELY TALENTED!
Ana
I thought this poem was good cause it was romantic and very good sounds like the author has someone special in mind and don't stop writing
Jessica
This poem hit me str8 in the heart. They know EXACTLY how being in love w/ someone you haven't told feels. Do yo' thang!
shane
It was buityful it realy toched me. thanks.
marielle
i thought this poem was really good. who ever wrote it has talent, thats for sure.
Jackie
I loved this poem cuz it expresses the way alot of us feel when we see that special someone. Well done and it rhymes.
niki
this poem is so how i feel about my boyfriend and its every word
tara
im in love with this guy name jay this peom really did touch me
Mario
I LOVED THIS POEM
Niggi
This si a very, very good poem Bobby. I have had similar experiences. Your poem made me think. Maffe me think about why we love. Why loving hurts so much and tha fact that hurting is love. Thank you.
Danielle
i loved this poem, it put me in tears . it reminds me of myself, i feel in love with this guy and i had liked him for six months and i didnt have the guts to talk to him and this inspired me to talk to him and to tell him and i did . it is so fantastic! PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING!
hayley
this poem made me realise how much i love my boyfreind so i sent it to him and he started crying we dont get to see much of each other but when we do out time togther is very special Bobby you did a good job there fanxs to you our relationship has grown together
autumn
Wow! This is beautiful . This is how i feel when i am around my boyfriend.
alexandra
i luuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvv this poem its the best poem ever the best poem ive ever read wow i feel the same way 4 this guy wow u just read what i feel in my heart!
Jake
Dude this poem is awosme. i just want to say i felt the same way at a time i had idea wat to do. thnx for writng this dude PROPS!
Timothy
I wanted to vote for this because I get the same feelings all the time for one and only one girl.
Cent
Yes, I do love this poem because I have been in the same way. Me and this like boy each other but we are scared to tell another. he watches me I watches him. The only thing is that he have a girl friend
Kari
MAN I LOVE THAT POEM! THAT IS SUCH A REALLY REALLY GOOD POEM! THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POET! I LOVE HOW IT TELLS HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT THAT PERSON! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM!
liz
wow this pome was more than good all the rigth words were used you could feel the feelings in it and it really grabs me because i've been thorough what the pome talks about-thanks for the great reading
kendall
that was amazing it really touched my heart. congrates
kailey
that is such a great poem you did a great job it is so true in so many different ways
Emma
I love this poem. It relates to how i feel about a certain guy i know, and how i feel about him.
Kelsey
I really love this poem it reminds me and the guy i really like it is like and him. Great poem
ana
i do really like this poem
Antonya
I love this poem dearly already. I can relate to it in so many ways. That's the same feeling I get when I look into my boyfriend's eyes and always end up with the same question:"what is it you do to me" because I always find myself in a "sticky" situation
Megan
I really liked this poem because it describes perfectly what I feel for this guy. I just decided to look up poems and I came across this one, when I started to read it tears came to my eyes because of how exact it is. It's a GREAT POEM!
Amanda
It reminds me about how i am feeling about my best friend who is a guy.
Cody
This poem was sent to me by my girlfriend. I know she sent it from her heart, and it's great knowing that. I really liked the poem.
Rowena
I THINK THIS POEM IS SO GREAT I HOPE YOU GET SOMETHING FOR IT. I WAS JUST PASSING THROUGH AND JUST WANTED TO READ AND GUESS WHAT I SEEN. BEST OF LUCK! ROWENA
Joy
i love it I feel that way baout somebody right now. i mean everything u said jst hit it 4 real. it was beautifully written
Bean
this poem is definately the best poem i've read! it describes exactly how i feel about my crush.
Malinda
I really love this poem. I t reminds me of my feelings for my ex with whom I am talking ot again. We are thinking about dating. Thanks! It is truly amazing!
cristal
i liked it couse it was nice and it rememeber me of things that have been going on in my life
Brian
I don't read poems like this alot, it's just great.
maria
it really touched me i understand how u feel i have the same feeling 2!
pamela
Hey will i think this was a great poem i can really relate to it because i am going through the same thing with my guy best friend.
Eva
this was a really good poem that i can relate to from a certain point of my life inthe past.
Amanda
I absolutly adore this poem it is so honest and beautiful and it truley paints the picture of a teenage boy hoplessly in love with a girl. Adorable.
guadalupe
I loved this poem poem because it really relates with my life right now and it describes everything i feel for the person I like and this is a great oppurtunity for me to think of what I doing because if that person doesn't like me back then what's the use .
lindsay
this poem was beatiful it reminded me of what im going through right now!it was beautiful! love it love it love it.
CECILIA
YOUR POEM WAS BEAUTIFUL. IT MADE ME CRY BECAUSE I UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW IT FEELS TO WANT SOMEONE SO MUCH. THANK YOU.
Nathalie
i just love this poem. i would love to receive such a one. i don't kinow it just touches me. i really like it ! great poem !
Deena
I lurve your poem! It was excellent. That's just tha way i'm feelin rite now. Great Job!
aldo
this poem hits the spot because i have been going after a girl for quite a while and this poem describes the way i feel everytime i see her thanks
Shanika
That was real cuz I konw how that feel
casey
wow. that poem was great keep it up. i feel the exact same way. and he just seems to not understand me at all. i just sit there in amazement and watch him as he talks to me as if he cant tell how i feel. i hope the best for you in your writing. its awesome so keep it up!
Rachel
Wow. it's like you read what I was thinking! I've liked one of my best guy friends for 3 years now but I haven't had the guts to tell him. I think your poem inspired me to do so. Thanks!
Ashley
Your poem was exactly how i feel right now. You did a great job!
Erica
I love your poem. That's exactlly how I feel about my friend but I don't have the nerve to tell him.
jody
i love ur poem it reminds me alot about this boy that i liked for a 1 and a half and i still like him from this day.
marcy
that is very beautiful it touched my heart in every way i know how it feels and you described every inch of my emotions thanx alot
Kiersten
DANG! That poem is AWESOME, I was thinking to myself, WHOA because you put the exact words into my mouth, that's unbelievable how great you describe that feeling, I LOVE IT!
Joshua
That poem is well written and full of emotion. It also totally reminds me of my feelings for this girl at my school, who i love, but dont want to.
kayla
I really love this poem. I gave it to my boyfriend because it was so good.
Kristin
This poem is one of the best poems i have ever read i love it!
Kakela
This poem is great and I can relate so much to it. Nice way to express your true feelings.
Holly
I enjoyed your poem becuase I now what it feel likes to be there. A guy in my life is playing me too. Thank you for writting this poem it helped me get over him.
Suga Babi
Your poem made me think of a guy i wanna be with and that i care about very much. its very good i like it alot
Meghan
This is an amazing poem! I LOVE it!
Rebecca
this is an amazing poem i love it there is this guy that i feel the same way about
brandi
This is a really good poem!
Jenny
Oh My God I cannot describe how much this poem relates to what I feel every day when I go to school. Ive been dating this guy for a few months but its quite casual but I'm completely in love with him. In lessons I just sit and stare at him and imagine him sleeping, it sounds wierd but at least now I know that someone else feels that way about somebody too - well done.
babygurl
i really like this poem, i wish it was here when i felt like this about my best friend a few years ago!lol! i did get over it though, i found a guy i really love an me an my best friend now laugh about how we used to feel about eachother, cuz i jus found out that he had tha same feelings for me!
Megan
I like this poem alot! that is how i'm feelin right now about my x boy friend! We just broke up, he says he wants to be friends for a while then get back togethetr!I still love him and hope we are together thats the problem!
AJ
caught the essence of what a person feels when falling in love and fearing what it might bring. wonderful poem.
Alisha
NICE POEM
Kevin
This poem is 100% the best poem that I've ever seen. It describes how my girlfriend and I care about each other. This poem should be rated number one for how nice and true it is.
Tiffany
This poem PERFECTLY describes what I'm feeling right now about my crush. I know what's it's like to try to get over someone only to have those feelings rekindled again. But I absolutely loved this poem! I can really get a sense of how you feel about this person. Keep writing! :)
Bethany
when i read this it gave me butterflies in my stomach because its so for real! i loved it!
ashley
This poem reminds me of me when me and my boyfriend i still love broke up and how i still feel for him! I Love it a lot keep up the good work!
Belinda
I think this poem is very inspirational and it reminds me of the kinda of relationship I have with the guy I like, his name is antony. haha. Well baybee if you see diz, I love you! Hehe. it was quite good, it kinda inspired me to tell him how I really feel about him and the I love him, hehe. well, I wrote him a letter and now I know how he will know on Monday when I give him the letter along with his birthday present. Hehe. !
Shannon
wow. i hun i totally know how u feel. its like my words spoken by some1 else. great job on the poem.
Justin
Wow, thank you for that cooly cool cool of a cool poem! I feel the same way about a girl and just thanks for expressing it through your poem!
Aaron
Great poem. It makes me think of that someone and all the things you said.
Caitlin
Your poem reminds me of the painful yearning you feel for someone who doesn't ache for you in return.
louise
this is such a good poem, its exactly how i felt about a great friend of mine, i still love him but not like i did, kisses
Sarah
i am in a situation right now. where they guy that i like is a friend. and i want to tell him so badly what he does to me. your poem was awesome and it tells everything that i am feeling right now!
natasha
i loved this poem!. it reminded me of my life, i love a teacher, and what u wrote is exactly what its like for me!
Nicole
I love your poem and it reminds me of how I feel everyday about this certain someone! I'd give it a 110!
Beth
I thought this poem was the best I would love tp hear some more thanks
Nick
it is a great poem it totally describes what i feel about this girl in my school
Denise
Your poem clearly describes in detail a love that is kept hidden from a person. I really like it because in my life it happens most of the time.
Rachel
i thought your poem was great i couldn't beleive how it could have discribe on how i felt before. It's just perfect
prince
i love your poem. it reminded me of how i felt about my current g/f there is jsut something about her that i cant explain that has me lost in her eye's thank you for the memory. I would also like to turn your poem into a song
Amy
I want to thank you for writing this poem. My best friend is feeling the exact same feelings as you are and she had never really known how to express them. This poem really helped her! Great poem!
REGINA
I THINK THIS WAS A REALLY GREAT POEM AND IT TOUCH ME IN SO MANY WAYS U WILL NEVER KNOW. MY BOYFRIEND SENT THIS TO ME AND IT MADE MY DAY BETTER THANKS FOR WRITHINGA WONDERFUL PEOM.
Jill
I think this is so beautiful. I 100% identifies with myself. I've been in the exact situation and it almost makes me cry when I read it. Thanks
shawnee
THank you from the bottom of my heart for writng this poem. I feel the same way write now. I like this guy so much but I feel like hes playing with me. Sometimes he tells me things that make it seem like he likes me but then he acts so strange the next time we talk. I don`t know what in the world to do anymore. But it feels nice to know that i`am not the only one. Thanx again.
Corey
I love the poem. It's probably the best I've heard. I can relate so much to it.
sw33tvi3tangel
This poem really touches me. I know how it feels to love someone hopelessly but you cant have them. Please continue your wonderful work, you are a very talented poet. I admire the way you can just make words flow like that, i wish i had the same talent as you.
chantel
I love this poem! I can perfectly relate to your situation! You have inspired me to write more about it. )
Ashley
your pome was reale goood i like it it made me cry i just want to tell you to keep the writting up
shalia
i love it. it made me think
slugger
this was a great poem. means alot to me and how i feel about a guy
slugger
it is a tru feeling of how i feel about a boy
John
your poem was great the words were way good and i could really relate to them. instead with a girl u know. anyways i liked it a lot props to you keep writing you have a special talent
Garrett
your poem was really great and it really got to me. I can relate completely to the poem, except with they way a girl makes me feel. Good job
Shelby
Wow i never thought how i felt could be put into words. But you did it wonderfully. I know how you feel because this very moment i feel the same way. Hang in their, and hopefully things will get better for us all.
Gracie
OMG! it was great very moving i feel the same way about this boy! I loved the poem! Keep writing
Krystal
I really love this pe4m i think this dude knows what to say!
SHANTE
GURL U JUST DON'T KNO HOW MUCH I AGREE WIT WHAT U ARE SAYIN! IT'S SO TRUE. IT'S LIKE U CAME IN MY MIND AND MADE IT INTO WORDS!THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT INSPIRING POEM! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU AS LONG AS I LIVE! THANK YOU AGAIN ~PEACE, HOLLA, AND MUCH LUV! 1
Kay
This is a Really Good poem. I have felt the same way about someone, but i finally got to open up and express it to him. I have also written poems like this. but again yours is nice too. hopefully you will soon have the opportunity to let him know how you feel if you choose to do so.
Mel
omg, this is excatly what happened to me awhile, i lost the guy i liked, to my best friend. we lost out friendship over it, but about 5 months later we shared something i think is the most specail night in my life. they are still together, but no matter what happens, that one i love, and no i cant have, is always the most specail in my heart! thanks for this awesome peom, i wish u all the luck!
Soph
oh my god! wot a beaytiful poem. I luv it sooooo much. Bobby u r realy talented! well dun!
Christina
Its a really great poem for anyone goin through that and im sure it would help them!
Crystal
i love ur poem i can really relate to it
Andrew
wow. that is a REALLY good poem. it describes EXACTLY how i feel
karen
i like this boy and i feel the smae way about him i cant beleave how u pin pointed it out just like me
clink_gurl
i really, really enjoyed your poem! it is so good! it was also very, very touching 2 me. i can totally relate 2 this poem. i know it can be hard and rough, but u just have 2 keep goin no matter how hard it is. though it is really hard when u like some1 so much and they dont even know. just hang in there!
LINdsay
this poem is amazing! it says so many things at once.
Sana
This is a great poem, i felt this way with my first true love after i saw her always with this guy it killed me to even look at her. This poems describes alot of feelings KEEP up the GREAT work.
Court
Every time I read this poem it makes me think of how i feel when I see this one guy. This is a very good poem.
Min
i feel exactly the same! i could never express my feelings like the way you did! hope to read more of your poems. Godspeed!:)
becca
it is a good pome and tell what you fill and what you want not to fill
lysa
this poem is one of my many favorites on this web site. It made me almost cry and I can relate to it . It really made me think about the relationships I have now. It was really touching.
Kelly
I love your poem it explains everything. Thank you so much for writeing that you have helpe me alot
Eric
This poem touchs my heart every time I read it. It's a beautiful work of art and should touch every ones heart who has ever experienced what you went through I have loved this girl for 2 years and I lost her to my friend but I relized that if I loved her as much as I said then I should get her back and I proposed to her and we are getting married on sEPTEMBER 21, 2004! Much love for all who read this poem find that person and don't let get away from you!
Jerem
This poem was a two thumbs up! It so described the sitiation Im in, sitting there, loving someone when they dont seem to notice, even after you've told them (thats my case)
Doug
dude that is the best poem i have heard in along time
nisha
WOW!THAT WAS THE MOST TOUCHING AND HEART FELT POEM THAT I'VE READ SO FAR. I'M GOING TO PRINT IT OUT AND PUT IT ON MY WALL. CONTINUE DOIND WHAT YOU'RE DOING BELIEVE ME YOU WILL GO FAR!
camile
This poem totally says everything I am feeling at the moment, and it is really sad, I have been talking to this guy on the internet for some time then we started talking on the telephone, he was everything I had ever dreamed of, without seeing his face I knew in my heart he was the one, we finally met and yes he was all that I had hoped him to be and much more, the problem is I am still uncertain of how he fels about me, as the days go by I try to tell myself he will call but he has not
ash
This WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME! I READ IT TO MY DUDE AND HE STARTED CYRING! YOU MAKE SOME LIKE THIS AND YOU COULD BECOME A GOOD POET!
Chad
My girlfriends loved this poem, it has helped me a lot.
Josh
Dude i love that poem! i was wounderin if i could use it in a song for out band? i love it man!
Kate
Well. this is deffinatly one of the best poems i*ve eva herd cuz i can relate to it. it*s so perfect 4 my ex-boyfriend that i STILL love to death. i just wish he cared about me the way i care about him
meg
I love this poemmm i could totally relate to it im goin through the same exact thing. and ur right about dreaming its all u got sometimes and without them its lonely
Deshanna
I think that this poem was great, wonderful usage of words! keep it goin'!
Jenna
Wow, what a wonderful poem! Its the kind you read and think, well, I guess it makes since. But then you get in deeper and you realize how beautiful and amazing the topic is. I can relate to this so easily! A lot of people must say that, but its the total truth. I feel in love with my best friend, and I could not have him. But now we are closer than friends. The poem is amazing!
Amber
This poem is great I love it! it explains that feeling you feel when your loving someone soooo bad and you just dont know what it is that keep you with him. I t explains the feeling of tue love! This poem is great!
Shyel
Oh my god this poem fits the way I feel about a guy so much. I really liked your poem.
Marie
I've been reading a lot of poems lately trying to find the right one to describe feelings I have for this guy I like. After about five months of reading I finally found one. This poem is amazing! It describes every feeling I have in the perfect words. It's beautiful. I absolutely adore it.
Tiffany
I think that this is a wonderful piece. Great job. It is so true, many times over.
Holly
wow, that is totally amazing. I read it over the phone to a guy i liked, and he was really touched by it and i just said "that's what i feel, think about it" and now he really likes me as well!
Kim
I love this poem! It touched my heart as i read it. It explains my life very clear!
mel
Ryan this is what i think of you!
Kayte
this is a great poem really touching :) GOOD STUFF!
Meli
wow. That was really beautiful. It sounds like that guy is really missing out. I am sorry you have to feel that way and not be able to share your love with him.
Katie
I love your Poem!
Shata
This poem is so true. Some boyz jus dont understand whut they be doin but some of them do. but until i get whut i want i will goin at it i want give up!
Meeka
I think that boby's poem is beatfull. The poem expresses falling in love to the fullest. This poem remindes me of my 3 year ex crush and currrent boyfriend. The poem was nice it expressed such deep feeling that could only could be expressed by a exact viarty of carefully picked words. The poem is wondrfull and i hope to see many more like it.
sara
Your poem is so good. YOur story is just like mine except me i'm in love with a girl. and i'm girl. Neway, you got a lot of talent!
Danie
You did a really great job. You are very talented. This poem really hit home.
Karem
I really loved your poem in fact is one of the best ones i've ever read. When i read it it reminded me of my self and my crush. right now im going to the same stuff that you are andi think that you're absolutely right sometimes all we have are dreams. :D
James
This was a real work of art. A+ work! Continue to write these out
Angel
I LOVED THIS POEM. IM IN LOVE WITH A BOY, AND HE JUST MAKES ME SEE A WHOLE OTHER SIDE OF LIFE. hE MAKES ME HAPPY WHEN I AM SAD AND MAKES MY DAYS SUNNY WHEN THEY ARE CLOUDY. THIS POEM TELLS ALOT. I LOVE IT. HOPE TO READ MORE JUST LIKE IT.
Love
I loved this poem it was really good and for me its so true how I feel about my best friend the guy in my life that makes me whole. But I can never get the chance to tell him that cause I love him so much that I don't want to lose him.
lucia
This is the poem which expresses the love i have for a guy. who Ive loved ever since year seven and now im in year 10 and i still love him. everytime i see him play the guitar i just feel my heart burst with saddness and love for him. it tears me apart.
Cris
That was an awsome poem! It made butterflies in my stomach! I'm going to give it to my boyfriend. It's a A+!
Lacie
i really like this poem it reminds me of this boy in my school named Buck he's really cute but that's not why i like him he's smart,nice funny. but i mean he looks at me constitly and i do wonder what he thinks of me im like head over hill for this guy !This poem is the BOMB!lol
Court
Oh my! That was the poem that explained the exact feelings i have for this guy. I dont know how he feels but i will soon find out.
patri
this poem is exactly what goes through my mind when i see him i seem to analyize everything he does wether its intentional or not. i wish so badly he could see my point of view like this so he could understand what he puts me through. thank you i thought i was alone.
KK
I really like your poem, i understand what your gong though i am in that situation right now.
rober
Hey i will like to know what it is about my grul friend what it is that she did to me
R
I loved that poem what you do to me by Bobby Lincoln. It related most to my life now and I loved it.
Jenny
Your poetry was wonderful. you capture what i think every girl feels when her crush/boyfriend passes her by or when she looks at them i know thats what i feel anyway. thanks for the inspiration. I hope you get your man because i got mine so It's not impossible. Keep trying girl!
Brina
I love this poem it is probably one of the best I have read in a long time!
Dale
Fantastic poem says alot means alot makes you feel alot
Kelli
I can't believe that someone other than myself is in the exact same prediciment. I have been in love with someone for the past 7 months and I feel the same way. Thank you for writing this poem, It has helped me realize that loving someone dosen't have to be the end of the worls after all.
Oli
This poem really got to me, It is exactly how I feel for the girl I love very much, Kirsty. Well Done, deserves a lot of credit.
Mel
Hey, I really loved your poem because I feel exactly the same way. I know hear alot about this but it's really nice that someone is not too different from me.
lorie
this poem relates to me because it is exactly how i feel about my love
Tiff
That is so awesome! I can totally relate to what you wrote! It sounds exactly like what I went through with my best friend! Now we are toghether! So tell him! Great Writing!
Tina
GREAT POEM!
John
I really was touched by this poem because this is how I feel about my ex-girlfriend that I still love very much.
Nikki
I totally love your poem. It made me think about this guy that i loved for so long before he realized it. I am with him now and will stay that way for a long time. (I hope)
Darnell
This poem really touched me because I feel the same way about this girl who does not know I even exist, it feels like.
Jenna
I love this, it makes sense, and its partly how I feel!
YOUNGSTA
THIS POEM IS TITE!
Lillian
best pome i readed in a long time.
Chris
This is exactly how I feel. This poem gives me chills every time I read it, it's beautiful.
Lyl
this is so totally what i'm going through. i feel like he knows i like him and that i just add to his ego when i'm around. i mean we're really good friends to boot but him having the knowledge that i like him i think makes him want me around more. your poem pierces me in the heart. Your poem is really awesome.
Lexi
That was really good. Finally a poem that actually describes something REAL.
tessa
i loved this poem alot..it made me think of this guy im so in love with and when i talkto him he makes me wanna burst and tell him how i feel.!
TeBeth
this was a really touching poem and i could really relate toit ALOT! I think it was great and id like to see more of them.
chrarlize
i love this poem it is just exactly the way i feel about the guy i like, thanx it is truly good
Anastasia
i loved ur poem. it was amazing.i have the same feelings for somone that i love and ur poem truly described them. i just wish that someone that we love would know how we feel.
Brooke
I really like this peom because it reminds me of how I feel when I seen my friend Brian. i feel as if I could just die when he dosent show to see me or if he dosent talk to me when hes around me!
Weber
oh my god! your poem seems to speak straight from my heart to the woman im in love with! very awesome poem!
boycrazy
Hmmm. so sweet.
Brian
This poem is the greatest cuz it is exactly how i feel about my x-gf soon to be gf I LOVE THIS POEM!
Loree
hey this poem is very good i felt like this i mean the same way. but then i told the guy how i felt and now we are together b/c he felt the same way. tell this guy how you feel im serious it just might work
Erika
this poem was awesome.i can relate to it so much.this is how i felt about this one guy named chris.but now we are together and i am the happiest i have ever been.i liked him and only him for 2 years before we got together
KaTe
hey i jus wnated to say i love ur poem..i can relate to it with the situation im in right now with a guy but he has a gf so it makes it worse! neway great poem
Patricia
The intro to the poem touched me more than the poem itself. I can really relate to what shes feeling: EXACTLY
hannah
I thought the poem was great!
Cynthia
I know exactly where you are coming from. I hate being in this position. I think this si a really good poem and you are a terrific writer. Keep up the good work.
tom
ya sittin on a rocket of potential
tasha
This is the greatest poem ever.This is exactly how i feel like everytime im around that guy,talking to him,ne thing its like hes just wanting me to know that im not the one but he wants me to continue pleading for him!
jamie
That poem was beautiful! I loved it! It touched my heart and just made me think..What does people think of me?..Wonder who likes me?..Why do they like me?.etc. Not many poems makes me think, thanx alot and I love this poem So0O much!
VaNeSsA
I love your poem so much! It hits so close to home for me. I know exactly how you feel! I feel taht way about this one guy I always see but, you're lucky because I have never even talked to him! (i'm too shy) I really LOVED your poem! It touched me:)
cassy
This is a really beautiful poem because it is very emotional.I too understand the pain of somebody ignoring true love. Keep up the good work!
lauren
I really loved your poem. It so reminded me of my botfriend,my love, that I am with right now.
Stephanie
WOW GIRL I LOVED IT KEEP WRITING AND I WILL KEEP VOTING
ashley
geesh! that poem it tyte i luv it
Jenn
Great poem, best ever. Im glad to know that people feel the same way too. thanx for making me realize reality
aaron
That was a great peom, I read this to my soon to be girlfriend and she loved it thankyou
Eau'
SWEET!
Adam
That is a beautiful poem. Reminds me of alot.
jessica
Great poem bobby, i love it i have a girl i like and i watch her all the time and it makes me go crazy when i can't be with her or talk to her
Amy
This poem is very well written. It is exactly the way I feel about my friend Justin. I'm so glad to know I'm not the only one! Thanks!
Alina
Your poem was beautiful! It relates so much to how I feel about someone right now! I actually wanted to cry when I read this poem! Keep on writing poems!
Roxy
i just wanted to say i give you props for this poem because this is how i feel at this moment and i about to dedicate it to someone special
Tiffany
That was a very touching poem. I never thought i would find a poem that would explain how it is i feel for this ceartain someone. I have liked Rich for 6 years now. I love him so much, yet i dont think he will ever think the same for me, it really really hurts. Great poem!
Nick
your poem was just.well u cant really put into words. But it hit me hard cuase i feel the same way. I miss my gurlfriend so much ill cry. She just does this thing to me and i dont know wut it is. REaLLY good poem.
Todd
I was trying to find a good love poem, and then I read "What it is you do to me" and I loved it. I read that poem all the time, Ive read alot of love poems that they make you read in school by all those famous poets, but this poem blows those other poems away.
ashley
this was one of the best poems ive ever read, it got so deep, that i started crying. it is exactly how i feel, every word was perfect. you are a great writer, keep it up! it felt like it touched my heart
Herbert
I know exactly how the author feels. I've fallen for a girl and she's a really good friend and all but whenever I'm around her, i feel like everything just slid into place. I hope the author writes more that are this true.
misty
This poem flowed really nicely without using a ryhme scheme. I liked it very much.
Matt
I'm only 15 and i see much heart of what you put into this poem, i can actually feel the sensations of the thoughts , and it reminds me of the crush i had and i see it a inspiration, I tip the hat for you, on your job well done.
Claudia
I LOVE IT!
Krysten
I thought this poem was awesome! I know exactly how you felt because I fell in love with my best friend. It's a wonderful and horrible feeling at the same time! Great poem!
Princess_angel
This poem is amazing! I loved it! Please write more! Your an awesome artist! Keep it up!
Kat
omg i loved it that was like totally how i wanted to tell the guy i like that i liked him and u just took the words right outta my mouth thank u u have a special talent
Brent
WOW! that poem was beautiful. it describes my feelings exactly. thanks for sharing this. it was awesome.
veronica
I adored this poem. It says in words exactly how I feel. I never thought that was possible unitl now. Keep writing because you are good!
Kristi
This poem relates to how i feel about my boyfriend. I could never discribe the strong feelings i felt in words until i read this person. Now I know what i feel is right. Thankz
Destiny
Hey~ This is such an awesome poem. I read it and it explained my exact feelings for this one guy. I sent it to him and then we got hooked up. So I can thank you and your awesome poem for my 3 month relationship.
Aelaine
WOW! DIS IS SO SWEET! Dis IS AWESOME. You really FEEL what you write and I also felt it. DAMN!
Simmons
The poem was great man. the content was awesome.
aimz
Wow, i nearly felt liked crying, it was beautiful. I'm in the same situation and it's hard, but this poem has inspired me to hold on a little longer! thanx
Katerina
Oh my god.I can feel you!I am facing this right now with a guy..It is so painful.And the worst thing is that i know i can have him but his best friend likes me so w MUSTN'T do anything caus ehe won't betary him..And i want him badly
Brent
This poem was great. There's this girl i really like and i can feel what you're sayin.
amanda
This poem was really cute.Thats how im thinking or feel about
jessica
that is a very good poem i realt to it alot i hope u keep on writing
Erica
I love this poem! IT REALLY REMINDED ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW HE FEELS ABOUT ME! SO THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A BEUTIFUL POEM.
Mandy
It is totally great peom. I like this peom! Well done! :O)..
Kim
I love this poem. this is what I feel for the one i'm in love with.
Annie
I loved that poem because it reminded me of my ex boyfriend! Bobby Lincoln- I Love You, your my hero!
flip
Dis poem be totallee hype yoh! It expresses da way I used to feel bout dis guy i loved off foh sooo long! i'm presently involved in a relationship na, but when i read dis poem it reminded meh of how much i loved dat guy.
lupita
wow! this is a really good poem i love it!
Monica
Whoa! This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. It totally explains how I feel about this guy. It was awesome.
ashley
it's a wonderful poem!
Maja
I loved your poem it touched my heart and its excectly how i feel about this guy ..i loved very much im sending it to all my friends GREAT JOB
tara
I LOVED IT. ITS HOW I FEEL FOR MY BOYFRIEND IN EVERY WAY
Vicki
I am a poet and I think you have talent. I enjoy this peice because of its unique way of describing. Many times I have felt like this and never thought that a poet could ever express it into words. When I read your work I felt a tear roll down my cheek. Maybe my b/f will realize what I have been tring to tell him if I give him this poem.
LE'SHELLE
THIS POEM IS DA BOMB, IT BRONGS BACK ALOT OF MEMORIES. BASICALLY THIS POEM IS TIGHT WORK!
k
AWSOME.perfect,just how i feel for hopefully my soon to be girlfriend..ashley.
karen
i love it! the words are so sweet and fonding! just a masterpiece!
amanda
wow! reading that poem was like you were reading my mind! i have definitly been in your shoes.great poem.
Jennifer
This poem was the best love poem that i have ever read. right now this is happening to me and i don't know what to do. when i read this i felt like i was going to cry. this was the best poem and will be till i die.
nicki
i love this poem so much because it tells my story an what i'm going through it describes me so much it's great!!
Ebonie
I really did enjoy the poem because it just told how i felt about this one person. It really put how I felt about about this one person down on paper.
andrew
omg,that was a kicking poem,its really sad tho, i think that was the best poem i have ever read
Ediana
very good poem..its exactly how i feell.
kyle
it was very touching.i sent it to the girl of my dreams.ill give it a 9.5 out of 1-10 rating.
melissa
this mad me cry and think of my very sweet boyfriend!!!
Attia
this is a very true and emotional poem .... if i were to rate it it would be a 10
lynn
I can identify with your poem and I actually wrote one that has strong similarities. It's a great poem!
Sosa
Tight. thats all im gonna say.
angela
very very good!!!!
Shelley
I was so shocked when I read this poem. It describes EXACTLY how I feel about this guy! The guy I REALLY like knows I like him & he flirts with me, but then he gets on these "Crazy" sprees and ingores me, flirts and kisses all these other girls while I'm around. Since he found out I like him, I guess he thinks he has me in "Check" and can go and mess with all these other girls and then come back to me later.... cause he knows I'll be there. It really hurts when he uses me as an "ego" booster! He is a really good friend and always makes me laugh, but if he only knew WHAT HE WAS DOING TO ME!!!! Thanks soooo much for writting this poem, I'm so glad there is someone out there who can relate to my "GUY" promblems. THANKS, SHELLEY NORRIS
Steven
i really,really like this and i would give it an 11 on a scale from 1 to 10 so thanks...
Roxy
i love that poem its just like what i feel about this guy....keep it up
Amber
I thought the poem is true in many ways, only people who have went through it can understand it, that's what I like about it. This poem just explains it all. It's really good!
brittany
I loved it
alex
this poem reminds me so much about my girlfriend and i feel every word when i look at her. it is a great love poem give my complements the the author
paul
your poem is bad ass. it took me back into some faded memories that i'd forgotten, but still exist.i really love the way you displayed such strong emotion.peace out. -archangel
amber
WOW!!!! I love this poem!!!!!!!!!
poh
perfect
Ryan
That was a great poem. It reminded me that I'm not the only one.
Tara
THIS POEM IS AWESOME, CUZ IT REMINDS ME OF HOW I FEEL FOR MY BEST FRIEND MIKE. HOW EVERY TIME I SEE HIM I GET BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY......
jenn
this poem was truly very touching and very very good..
Dayna
Great poem, it really touches your heart.
dusty
this is a lovely poem. bravo!
Tamesha
I love this poem. this has been the best just far. Keep up the good work Bobby!
meg
this was really good!
Mona
This poem says everything about how i feel about this guys that goes to my school. I only wish i had the guts to send it to him.
Parn
I can relate. Very moving for me.
Unwanted
I really like this poem. I'm 12 years old and I know what this situation is like. Believe me! And I'm also into poetry, and I, uh, I guess I really wanna write a good poem.a really good poem.like this one.
Amanda
this poem is so good. oh my gosh, this person is so talented. i hope to hear more poems from you soon!

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