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I wrote this poem to a guy that I was in love with and he had to move out of state. I will never forget him.

Juliet's First Love

by Linze

Everything was perfect
Like a relationship should be
Time spent together
Honesty trust till
Eternity

I never knew how much one day could mean to me
I guess I was blind
Not willing to see

My love of my life had to leave
Face to Face he slowly, patiently
Explained everything to me

Full of pain, shock
Not wanting him to leave
Was the hardest part that I did not want to believe

Silence, grieving
My heart could not take
I wanted to fall in a deep sleep and never awake

For the last time I look deep in his big blue eyes
And all I could see
Was a heart broken lover
Because of me

My Romeo has gone
But maybe he will return
To behold me his Juliet
Without saying one word

I need to move on
That is what I tried to remind myself
But it's hard for I could never love
anyone else.

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41 Visitor Comments

Ashley

this makes me sooo sad because my boyfriend just moved about 5 months ago. and i am so in love i cant stop thinking about him. he lives 8 hours away! there is a chance that he could move back and if he does then we are meant to be. GREAT POEM!

Samantha

its a poem about something real and not fake

Lauren

I really can't tell you that i know how you feel because i'm in a two year relationship to this day but i know it's really tough on you to lose someone so important to you. i know if i lost my boyfriend i'd probably go crazy. not only is he my boyfriend but he is my best friend too!

Caitlin

Very excellent poem! It has such depth and desire. I really felt the feelings that the author put into it. It made me feel an urge of love and happiness but, yet sadness all at once. I really enjoyed it and I wanted to say thanks to the person who created it!

alexa

I like your poem. It touched my heart. I did experience something similar but fortunately me boyfriend came back 2 wks later. So hey, maybe he will come back you nerver know. If not move on but don't 4get him.

tasha

this poem had really touched me when i read it cause this is how my boyfriend did i love him so much i cry over him all the time can i ask you something what does it mean when u think about some one does that mean thier thinking about u to

Shureka

This is a very good poem it makes me think of my ex-boyfriend .

caridad

this poems really touch me. it reaaly nice so some one u like or love very much hope to here more from u

robin

this pome is good

raihana

this is a good poem. great job

Crista

this poem reminds me of the boy i was in love with that had to move away. he even had blue eyes. i loved him so much and i was so sad when he moved. it was a great poem

Jacqy

All I can really say is that I cryed when I read your poem. It is so amazing how somebody could have so much passion and Love for another person, and the way you brought your feelings into words. it is such a beautiful thing. Great Job!

Brittany

Hi my name is Brittany Im 15 I know Im young but Im in love. In love with the guy who left me to go into the navy. Now hes in Washington and is not coming home for 4 years.

Keenan

This was one of the best powms I have ever read and it was very touching

Kim

I loved this poem, it reminded me of my x-boy friend,and what I had to go throw and thill do go throw.

stephanie

i love this poem it touched me so so ill leave in such a way ill just say keep writing poems till the end

Lauren

* i know how u feel in a sense, my boyfriend of over a year might be moving miles and miles away from me, its not for certain yet but i dont see how i could go on, ive never found ne one like him, hes everything to me, i know its hard for you, and ur poem was really good.

Patience

this was a really great poem that has happened to me before it was either he moved away or i moved away it was great

Jackie

I know how you feel. My feeling might be a little different though because im the one who has to move. i feel guilty because i know he really likes me and i really like him. Ihope 1 day i will move back so we can be together and i really hope he feels the same way then about me.

Desiree

hey omg its so weird but thursday was my boyfriends lasy day of school cause he is moving to new york so i had to break up with him but thsi poem is exactly hwo i feel

monica

this is an awesome poem, im in this situtation right now.

jessie

I can relate to this poem. I think its amazing

Tashina

When I read the poem I cried at the end. The man I love now is going through a very rough time while im away at school he doesn't want me to come back untill im done. He tell's me that he cant be with me for much longer cause he thinks that he isn't worth anything and will ruin my life if I return to him. He says that I could do so much better but to me he is the best and your poem really explains the way I feel right now and I am hoping he will not leave but he just might.

Alyssa

omg this poem made me cry lol

Maria

I loved your poem it really touched my heart greatly. I almost cried remembering my love who went away. I love it!

Tiffany

i have been though the same thing my first love moved out of state and we broke up but now hes back and we are talking again i say if its ment to be then it will come back some day keep up the good poems

Brittany

oh my gosh! i know how you feel! i live in texas and my boyfriend who i luv more than i can say, is about to be moving to colorado! if you knew us, you'd see how hard it's gonna be for us to part. i dont want this time to come, but now it's good to know that im not alone on this

Angela

Wow after reading that poem and all the responses I don't feel so alone any more. I had to give up my first love b/c he moved and he hasn't kept in touch. Not to mention the story of Roneo and Juliet is my favorite in the world. It really did touch my heart and made me remember him.

Megan

Hey girl, i love it! Your a great writer and also it sounds what happend to me. He asked me to go get married and i said yes and then he had to leave. but i know he will come back. but if your peom is true just remember that prince charming will come back again some day!love ya

Bridget

Excellent poetry Linze! Your poem expressed sad yet true, beautiful, and sweet emotions. It honestly made me cry. You did a wonderful job! :-) Keep writing.

CoCo

Your poem really touched my heart. my first true love just told me he might be moving to North Carolina and it's tearing me apart.

Ching

Good shot !

Julia

It's really very painful to leave your love. I'm not a poet myself but it touched me greatly.

Jen

very good poem!

Cicely

Your poem is the best poem that I read on here. It brought me to tears thank you so much for writing it! It touched my heart so much. Thank you

Elizabeth

Im sorry that had happen to you really because I kind of know what your going through cause Im supose to move this summer and leave thelove of my life I cry myself to sleep each and every night its so hard all I want to do is hold him tight but I have to face reality and get over it but somewhere in my heart i feel i wont out of all the guys Ive been with i never felt this way befor in my life my friends and family say its puppy love i say its real love i really cant say ive experienced the best love but in my opinoin i have!

cat

I love this peom. It is so true. That is exactly what happened with me when my boyfriend told me he was moving to Texas. Never have I fallin in love so fast and hard till I meet him. And I will never forget him. You do a really good job of writing from your heart. I love it.

princess

it reminds me of my boyfriend that i love very much and he left to maine

fantasy2tru

Been there done that so I know where your coming from. Sorry he had to go maybe one day your romeo will come get his juliet and you won't have to remember him leaving, you can just forget. good luck

Rebecca

I love this poem, it says exactly how I feel right now since my one true love is moving out of state. This author is truly a great poet.

michelle

I LOVED THIS POEM IT REMINDED ME SO MUCH OF MY BOYFRIEND WHO JUST RECIENTLY LEFT FOR THE NAVY BUT WE R STAYING TOGETHRE

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