About the Poem

I wrote this poem thinking about the perfect girl. I got inspiration from BLINK 182's song "JOSIE" and the feelings it provoked in me and the feelings the girl I wrote this about provoke in me. If anyone ever listens to BLINK 182 you know what I mean when I say I have meet my Josie.

You Make Heaven Look Like Hell

by Roche

I lose myself
in your beautiful eyes.
I can't pull away
even if I wanted to try.
You're perfect
in every way.
The thought of you
makes my day.
You came to me
from heaven above.
You flew in on wings
my angel of love.
When nothing seems
to go quite right.
and I no longer
can see the light.
I look upon
your angelic face
and I'm taken away
to a far better place.
I cherish
every word you've said.
You move me
like the music I play in my head.
In this world of false truths
I know only one thing true.
I'd give up everything
just to be with you.

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17 Visitor Comments

Lorraine

tha is what I have ben trying to say. I am not a sappy person by nature and this made me feel that way. Thanks and good job

map

made my cry

bianca

i liked your poem because its true 2 me. it made me feel as if you knew how i felt at a point in given time! awsome poem.

Jayne

awesom poem, almost as if you took the words right out of my mouth. amazing

Angela

Thanks for making this poem it makes me feel happy

I'am only 12 but this poem really touched my heart. Keep on doing these nice poems because its what most off the time gets a girl in love. Well atleast thats what i like. =o)

Clint

As we like to say in the Puzzler's Den, this poem's better than a Jimmy Riddle! I was genuinely moved.

victor

i think that this poem applies to most of the people that have or had a love that they have lost or are still with i know my girlfriend would like and cry to this poem i think that this poem is very touching and very insperational

Valerie

You have written a beatuiful poem! Keep going on your wonderful work in poetry!

Michelle

I believe that poem is very loving & beautiful. It is so far the sweetest poem I've read.

kristen

i loved your poem it was great.

DoLpHiNpRiNcEz

all i can say iz: OmYgAwD...dis poem iz so BEAUTIFUL! i jus luv it! ROCHE, u r such a talented poet, i hope 2 hear more if ur poetry in d near future! keep listenin 2 BLINK182!

Amanda

This poem describes exactly how I feel about the love of my life named Thomas!

Jen

This poem is absolutely great. It really moved me. Thank you for putting my thoughts into words.

Joshua

This is a very good poem.it makes me think of a lot of things.

TDB

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!

mandy

i loved this poem i can relate and feel it so much

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